May 31, 2005 · Posted in: General, In the News

A real winner

THIS one, for sure, is genuine. Wilfred Oliver Segovia, 23 years old and Filipino, won the top prize (and $3,000) in the recently concluded  international essay competition sponsored by the World Bank. The theme of this year’s competition is "Building a Secure Future: Seeking Practical Solutions."

The contestants were asked to answer two questions: What are the biggest obstacles you face in your daily life? and What practical solutions would you propose to build a secure future for yourself and others?

Segovia’s prize-winning entry, "The Triumph of Reason," provides us insights into the thinking of a young Filipino. "I was born in a time of turmoil and unrest in the Philippines," he begins. " In 1982, President Ferdinand Marcos strengthened his grip on power after nearly a decade of martial law. It was a time when Filipinos were slowly realizing that Mr Marcos’ dream of a ‘New Society’… was not coming into fruition."

The essay is interesting because it is both so despairing at the state of Philippine politics but also so hopeful that young people, through debate and discourse, can make a difference.

Here’s an excerpt: 

Soon, it will be my generation blindly electing fools and unqualified people into government.

Soon, my generation will have to face an increasingly oligarchic government wherein power and resources are concentrated within few political clans.

Soon, my generation will be acclimatized to think that it is perfectly acceptable to use public office for private gain. Soon, history will repeat itself all over again and we will still be where we were twenty years ago during the Marcos dictatorship. Only today, it is not a single tyrant, but a network of tyrants taking advantage of the whole nation. Enacting change slowly but surely is our everyday challenge.

Segovia’s practical solution draws from the experiences of the Ateneo debating club in going around the country to teach critical thinking, debate and argumentation to high school and college students.

To all the mature cynics out there, words of wisdom from a 23-year old : "Despite the immense task ahead, a small step in the right direction is infinitely more desirable than inaction."

5 Responses to A real winner

Avatar

ardythe

June 1st, 2005 at 12:03 pm

Uhoh So I thought the theme was the title. I joined that too. Anyway, my essay had more concrete actions than merely suggestions. Still, he has a point. However, debates are not the basis for an improvement in the economy.

Avatar

ardythe

June 1st, 2005 at 2:31 pm

BTW there are two of them who gained the first prize, the other is from Pakistan, Asnia Asim (http://www.essaycompetition.org/EMS/Essays2005/AsniaAsim.pdf).

Check this out.

Avatar

jojo

June 3rd, 2005 at 12:33 pm

one word for the kid – praxis.

Avatar

Jojo

June 4th, 2005 at 11:06 pm

I do agree that there is hope amidst the political decay that seems to permeate us. But I still find this a rather strange piece. If he did go around the country, the first thing the author would have noticed was the constant debate people are into: in the radio waves, at the karinderias and kanto stores where Tanduay is served with gusto. People debate at the kainan ng mga taxi drivers in along the riles of Sampaloc, the night food stalls in Banilad, Cebu, and Mintal, Davao. People even debate while waiting for the ferry to leave Cotabato for Pagadian, Zambo del Sur (two places which are supposedly war and/or kidnapping zones). Debates abound in our country. The only problem is that it is the “debates” of those with political and economic power that seem to catch media attention. Not the debates of these ordinary folks.

Avatar

benign0

June 5th, 2005 at 8:46 pm

“Despite the immense task ahead, a small step in the right direction is infinitely more desirable than inaction.”

But of course.

Question is what is this “right direction”?

I offer some insight on what this “right direction” for our society might be. A fundamental change in the DNA of our society — our culture, our ways, our philosophies, the very root of our being itself is the single biggest roadblock to a prosperous future for the Philippines.

Check out these ideas on http://www.getrealphilippines.com.

Comment Form